Indie-Licious Blog Hop (My Week 4)
Happy Indie-Licious Sunday! We’re going back to Nari this week, staying in Sweet Oblivion (The Sweet Series, Novel #1).
As I slowly and very carefully walked through the hallway, my heart betrayed my front of bravery, as I grew more and more worried with each advancing step. My eyes stayed glued to the spot Ray had been lying in before, now empty.
But it didn’t matter. None of that mattered, because as I stood staring at the empty spot and relief just starting to come over me at the thought that maybe Ray wasn’t home, someone grabbed me.
With my body stricken and seized with fear, I tried to scream but couldn’t. One strong arm was around my waist holding me to them from behind, the other was forcefully holding cloth against my open mouth and nose. A strong smell of chemical burned my nose, assaulting my lungs and senses. As my head began to swim, I tried desperately to understand what was happening, but no answer made sense. Was this Ray? Was he going to finish what he tried to do last night and finally kill me? Mycah wouldn’t save my life, only to kill me the next day. I kicked and clawed for my freedom, but as hard as I fought against my captor and to stay conscious, I lost the battle.
A black cloth bag was put over my head causing a whole new wave of panic to flood through me, just before my eyes unforgivably fluttered closed.
But it didn’t matter. None of that mattered, because as I stood staring at the empty spot and relief just starting to come over me at the thought that maybe Ray wasn’t home, someone grabbed me.
With my body stricken and seized with fear, I tried to scream but couldn’t. One strong arm was around my waist holding me to them from behind, the other was forcefully holding cloth against my open mouth and nose. A strong smell of chemical burned my nose, assaulting my lungs and senses. As my head began to swim, I tried desperately to understand what was happening, but no answer made sense. Was this Ray? Was he going to finish what he tried to do last night and finally kill me? Mycah wouldn’t save my life, only to kill me the next day. I kicked and clawed for my freedom, but as hard as I fought against my captor and to stay conscious, I lost the battle.
A black cloth bag was put over my head causing a whole new wave of panic to flood through me, just before my eyes unforgivably fluttered closed.
<3 Ardisone
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March 24th, 2013 at 8:44 am
Eep! This is scary. They don't want her to see where she's going…never a good sign.
March 24th, 2013 at 10:35 am
Wait, you can't stop there! lol
March 24th, 2013 at 11:34 am
Oh crap… why is everyone out to kill her?
March 24th, 2013 at 3:13 pm
Intense scene! This is so climbing my to be read list :). I agree with Donna.
March 24th, 2013 at 4:44 pm
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!
lol Thank you, Christie!! *happy dance*
March 24th, 2013 at 5:50 pm
That was a very well done scene! Now I want to know who done it…lol
March 24th, 2013 at 5:52 pm
And…whaaaat? You can't leave it like that!!!
March 24th, 2013 at 6:29 pm
Wow, powerful stuff! What is it with everyone this week? The teasers have been out of this world great and can I just say that is very cruel to leave us where you did! j/k
Elle C.
March 24th, 2013 at 8:32 pm
Oh my gosh! I hope we find out what happens to Nari next week!
March 31st, 2013 at 2:34 pm
Tease! Oh wait, that's the point. Nice scene.
April 25th, 2013 at 9:04 pm
we are totally stocking Bailey Ardison