Indie-Licious Blog Hop (My Week 4)

Happy Indie-Licious Sunday! We’re going back to Nari this week, staying in Sweet Oblivion (The Sweet Series, Novel #1).


      As I slowly and very carefully walked through the hallway, my heart betrayed my front of bravery, as I grew more and more worried with each advancing step. My eyes stayed glued to the spot Ray had been lying in before, now empty.
      But it didn’t matter. None of that mattered, because as I stood staring at the empty spot and relief just starting to come over me at the thought that maybe Ray wasn’t home, someone grabbed me.
      With my body stricken and seized with fear, I tried to scream but couldn’t. One strong arm was around my waist holding me to them from behind, the other was forcefully holding cloth against my open mouth and nose. A strong smell of chemical burned my nose, assaulting my lungs and senses. As my head began to swim, I tried desperately to understand what was happening, but no answer made sense. Was this Ray? Was he going to finish what he tried to do last night and finally kill me? Mycah wouldn’t save my life, only to kill me the next day. I kicked and clawed for my freedom, but as hard as I fought against my captor and to stay conscious, I lost the battle.
      A black cloth bag was put over my head causing a whole new wave of panic to flood through me, just before my eyes unforgivably fluttered closed.

<3 Ardisone

11 Responses

  1. Krystal Wade

    Eep! This is scary. They don't want her to see where she's going…never a good sign.

  2. Donna Dull

    Wait, you can't stop there! lol

  3. Bethany Lopez

    Oh crap… why is everyone out to kill her?

  4. Christie Rich

    Intense scene! This is so climbing my to be read list :). I agree with Donna.

  5. Bailey Ardisone

    Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

    lol Thank you, Christie!! *happy dance*

  6. Andrea Heltsley

    That was a very well done scene! Now I want to know who done it…lol :)

  7. Rebecca

    And…whaaaat? You can't leave it like that!!!

  8. Danielle Blanchard

    Wow, powerful stuff! What is it with everyone this week? The teasers have been out of this world great and can I just say that is very cruel to leave us where you did! j/k

    Elle C.

  9. Erin

    Oh my gosh! I hope we find out what happens to Nari next week!

  10. Dawna

    Tease! Oh wait, that's the point. Nice scene.

  11. Mary Lowery

    we are totally stocking Bailey Ardison

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